The uncertainty in love is the hardest to bear. We are often hesitant to express our love for various reasons and in doing so, we suffer. We always want the other person to say it first and wait for the same.
From a distance I can feel your gentle glance
Enough to send me into a blissful trance.
As if the constellations around me reel and dance
With hazy eyes, I dream of a budding romance.
Though I understand the words still unspoken
And in my heart I know you are the one
Who holds the key to the lock which is not open
But still I ponder if my heart will be broken.
In a dilemma if I should go ahead and propose
But shouldn’t he say it first, this is how it goes.
The confusion and uncertainty within me grows
But it is possible he might say no, who knows!
Lost in the silence and feelings of love
I pray to the angels that soar above.
And patiently I wait for the light of love
Till I get blessings from the God above.
© 2017 Shaloo Walia All rights reserved
Such a beautiful one Shaloo! If we have the faith and believe in HIM, he definitely sends us a message.
Thanks Radhika! Believing in His plans and just going with the flow definitely makes life much easier.
Beautiful feel shalloo, he’s the one who always don’t reject us only thing is we have to be patient till God answer us.
Thank you! We just need to have faith that He will do what’s best for us.
Romantic…!!! ?
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Love and its confusion described at its best! That’s how precious time is lost but after all we all have our inhibitions! Beautiful poem!!
Thank you! Inhibitions and fears add to the uncertainty of love and makes it so complicated.
Thanks for visiting my blog Shaloo. Glad that I found your blog ?
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Following you. It’ll be really amazing to have you around in my blog space.
Thank you ?
don’t wait, you don’t risk anything, only your ego can be hurt
Ego is the root cause of all misery.
yes, it is, so don’t let it stand on your way! The only thing in you which is scared of anything is your ego ?
You are right!
Your words ring true to the heart and soul, Shaloo!
I am glad you liked it ?
Beautiful rhyme and words.
Thank you!
Very nice post?
Thanks!
The dilemma of love and the conflict of egos… nicely expressed…
Thanks ?
Sometimes it’s worth the risk or one might miss a wonderful opportunity and always wonder. Lovely poem.
You are right. Who knows what the future has in store!
Beautiful post with meaningful word love it….
Thank you!
So true and beautifully written.
Thanks!
This poem has such a great rhythm ?
Thank you!
This poem is right on time. I’m in a similar situation where I like this guy on my job romantically. However being that I was raised that me should approach first and I don’t want to risk rejection or ruin our friendship I am not going to tell him how I feel. That might mess up the friendship. It’s best to let God speak with him then once the Lord says it is okay he should make the first move.
I know it’s really hard to wait. But have faith and let things unfold by themselves. I wish you good luck..May you get what your heart desires!
This is great!
Thanks!
Beautiful poem expressing love and its fear of rejection. I guess that fear lies in
the heart of both women and men.
miriam
Yes and this fear is the biggest hurdle in the way of love.
As incertezas nunca são boas amigas, mas a certeza de ter uma excelente amiga isso tenho.Para o verdadeiro amor não há barreiras, e os caminhos a percorrer devem ser bem estudados ou podemos cair no caminho da incerteza. Gostei do poemas. Tudo de bom.
True love indeed transcends all barriers. I am glad you liked it ?
Feelings are beautifully jotted by words …ur work touched my heart…time is somethings that haunts a lot nd it’s something’s that slips between our fingers …all I say is never be too late
Thank you! It’s never too late for sure.
Beautifully said
Thank you!